Comments on: Poem to a Kleenex http://www.acceity.org/2009/03/poem-to-a-kleenex/ The weblog of Joshua Wachuta Wed, 08 Sep 2010 00:56:42 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.1 By: Ellen http://www.acceity.org/2009/03/poem-to-a-kleenex/comment-page-1/#comment-62 Ellen Mon, 16 Mar 2009 03:15:32 +0000 http://www.acceity.org/?p=474#comment-62 I like the poem, but I think that you should hold out to really mention that it is a tissue. You could probably switch the second and third stanza... with a little tweaks here and there. I like the poem, but I think that you should hold out to really mention that it is a tissue. You could probably switch the second and third stanza… with a little tweaks here and there.

]]> By: Eric http://www.acceity.org/2009/03/poem-to-a-kleenex/comment-page-1/#comment-61 Eric Sun, 15 Mar 2009 04:48:25 +0000 http://www.acceity.org/?p=474#comment-61 I like this poem. If it did not have that title, one might think of a really bad prom date. But perhaps, this can relate to both and how it can be taken either way is interesting. It has very good imagery, but I am not the one taking the writing course, so what do I know? It is a very nice poem, though. I like this poem. If it did not have that title, one might think of a really bad prom date. But perhaps, this can relate to both and how it can be taken either way is interesting. It has very good imagery, but I am not the one taking the writing course, so what do I know? It is a very nice poem, though.

]]> By: Joshua http://www.acceity.org/2009/03/poem-to-a-kleenex/comment-page-1/#comment-60 Joshua Sat, 14 Mar 2009 20:43:02 +0000 http://www.acceity.org/?p=474#comment-60 Thank you Mr. Ostrich, that second "would" was a typo, I have taken it out. Thank you Mr. Ostrich, that second “would” was a typo, I have taken it out.

]]> By: Alex Ostrich http://www.acceity.org/2009/03/poem-to-a-kleenex/comment-page-1/#comment-59 Alex Ostrich Sat, 14 Mar 2009 20:40:35 +0000 http://www.acceity.org/?p=474#comment-59 I like it. Just one technical thing, is the word "would" supposed to be repeated twice in the fourth line? It might be, and I just don't understand it, but I thought I'd check. I like it though. Before the "I don't know what tissues..." line, I had forgotten the title and hence was just thinking of the subject as a human/girl/date and not a tissue, and it took me a couple seconds to look at the title again. Very good stuff. I like it. Just one technical thing, is the word “would” supposed to be repeated twice in the fourth line? It might be, and I just don’t understand it, but I thought I’d check.

I like it though. Before the “I don’t know what tissues…” line, I had forgotten the title and hence was just thinking of the subject as a human/girl/date and not a tissue, and it took me a couple seconds to look at the title again. Very good stuff.

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